Simple-twine-story

At the beginning of this summer, Lorian has already made his plan to spend few time during the vacation by visiting his big brother Gael who has been living at New York since 8 years. Gael left Champaign after he graduated from U of I and settled down st New York in 2007. Ther, he works in a Big Technical firm as a manager until now Maried to a young chinese lad, they have two beautiful daughters Lolah and Kenya Either [[Lorian would go to New York]], or [[he would stay in Champaign]].

Lorian has been putting some money on the side to buy a flight ticket and to prepare a present that he will offer to his nieces and his sister-in-law.[[next]]

Days were passing, Lorian was getting more and more excited and cannot wait for being that day. He decided to start packing his stuff and beg his friend Doksa to care of his cat and his appartment when he will be gone.[[Next]]

After a long line in the store, he finally got to the cashier and purchased these artcicles whitout asking to himself if [[they will fit in his luggage]]

The next day, Lorian catched a bus and went to the Mall to find a fantastic present that he will bring to his brother's kids and wife and there, he bought two identical puppies for his nieces and a purse for his sister-in-law.[[On his way]]

On his way back to home, Lorian got a little bit anxious about the size of his two puppies and started to question himself: what if this present does not fit in the luggage? [[Am I going to ship it before I take my flight?]], or [[can I just carry both puppies on my lap?]]

All his ideas were hitting each other in his head when the bus stopped at the Illinois Terminal. Lorian get off from the bus, tired and walked few minutes [[to his apartment]].

So, is he going to ship the present two days before his flight or is he going to carry both on his lap all along the trip? [[gave the idea up to ship them instead]]

Lorian made the decision to carry both puppies on the lap and [[gave the idea up to ship them instead]]

It was already night time when he arrived. So, he decided to get a nap and think about them tomorrow morning after his breakfast.[[ Next]]

At 6 o'clock am, his alarm started beeping. when he woke up and began to put the last touch in his luggage, he noticed that the two puppies will not fit in the luggage and the purse as well. [[they will fit in his luggage]]

.Lorian has finally decided to ship the present.So he called his friend Doksa to drop him to the post office. A few time later, he was there already but before the shippemnt process he asked himself: is he going to ship fast or in the normal way? [[Shipping in the fast way is going to be great, the package will take less than 3 days to arrive]] [[The normal shippement was not a good choice. the package took a full week to arrive ,and this was behind Lorian's expectation.]]

Two days after, the package were already at new york .The day after,Gael received a call from the post office informing that a package arrived from champaign but his signature was requested before the post office released that package.Gael called his brother to let him know about the package that received from the post office. [[Is he going to pick up the package ?]] Or he is going to wait until the post agent bring the package to his address?]]

instead of shipping the present in the normal way,a brillant idea came out of his brain:He could purchase the same product in the same store at new york on line and request a drop off service to his brother's address. [[or, wait until he will arrived At New York and purchase the present that his nieces will eventually choose and like?]]

What if he did not found his first choice at the store at New York? [[is he going to search until he found the one that he was look for?]] [[or,he will give up on any choice and give the choice monopole to his nieces?]]

Gael was not sure about the post office's horaire;He wanted to go but was not sure if he should go now or the next day? [[At that time the post office was already closed, It will be better for him to come back the next day]] [[The next day, early in the morning Gael went to the post office to pick up the package but the agent who was working at the delivery department was recently hire and do not know where to fid the storage location]].

The next day Gael decide to call the post office about the lost items ; [[is he going to give up on any search?]] [[or is he going to request a replacement ?]]

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The situation was getting confusing when he did not found the ones that he was looking .What is he gonna do? [[Is he going to arrive anyway without any gift ?]] [[Or is he going to plan something else?]]

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